GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(五七)
<p> 57. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Boards">Boards</span>, <span word="Inc">Inc</span>., <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convince">convince</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="River">River</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Boards">Boards</span> <span word="billboards">billboards</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="locally">locally</span> <span word="manufactured">manufactured</span> <span word="products">products</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Boards">Boards</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="seen">seen</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="experiment">experiment</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="womens">womens</span> <span word="marathon">marathon</span> <span word="champion">champion</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="publishing">publishing</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="billboards">billboards</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="River">River</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="months">months</span>. <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="although">although</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="champion">champion</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="won">won</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="title">title</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="receiving">receiving</span> <span word="extensive">extensive</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="publicity">publicity</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> 15,000 <span word="randomly">randomly</span> <span word="surveyed">surveyed</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="River">River</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="correctly">correctly</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="champion">champion</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>; <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="experiment">experiment</span>, 35 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="name">name</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="experiment">experiment</span>, <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Board">Board</span>, <span word="Inc">Inc</span>. <span word="displayed">displayed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span>. <span word="little">little</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="athlete">athlete</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="billboards">billboards</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> 3-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="experiment">experiment</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="athletes">athletes</span> <span word="name">name</span>, <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Boards">Boards</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Boards">Boards</span> <span word="billboards">billboards</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="experiment">experiment</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="athlete">athlete</span> <span word="shows">shows</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="billboard">billboard</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>; <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>. <span word="Name">Name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="admittedly">admittedly</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="selling">selling</span> <span word="potential">potential</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="merchandise">merchandise</span> <span word="sells">sells</span>. <span word="Affordability">Affordability</span>, <span word="quality">quality</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="desirability">desirability</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="equally">equally</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="important">important</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="possess">possess</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sell">sell</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Big">Big</span> <span word="Boards">Boards</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="does">does</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="ludicrous">ludicrous</span>.</p>
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