GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(六五)
<p> 65. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="promotional">promotional</span> <span word="literature">literature</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Cerberus">Cerberus</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="food">food</span>.</p><p> <span word="Obesity">Obesity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="pet">pet</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span>, <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="owners">owners</span>. <span word="Obesity">Obesity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="typically">typically</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="calories">calories</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="humans">humans</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proper">proper</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="losing">losing</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>-<span word="calorie">calorie</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fiber">fiber</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="carbohydrates">carbohydrates</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="owners">owners</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="restrict">restrict</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Cerberus">Cerberus</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>-<span word="calorie">calorie</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="food">food</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fiber">fiber</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="carbohydrates">carbohydrates</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="makers">makers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Cerberus">Cerberus</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="recommend">recommend</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>-<span word="calorie">calorie</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="owners">owners</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="obese">obese</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>. <span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simple">simple</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="obesity">obesity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>-<span word="calorie">calorie</span> <span word="diet">diet</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fiber">fiber</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="carbohydrates">carbohydrates</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>-<span word="calorie">calorie</span> <span word="Cerberus">Cerberus</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fiber">fiber</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="carbohydrates">carbohydrates</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="low">low</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Cerberus">Cerberus</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="obesity">obesity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="couple">couple</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="makers">makers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Cerberus">Cerberus</span> <span word="dog">dog</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="obesity">obesity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="humans">humans</span>. <span word="Given">Given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vast">vast</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="patterns">patterns</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="basic">basic</span> <span word="diets">diets</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dogs">dogs</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="dubious">dubious</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unacceptable">unacceptable</span>.</p>
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