GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(六二)
<p> 62. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="Cafe">Cafe</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="location">location</span>. <span word="After">After</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="spot">spot</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="before">before</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="owners">owners</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="RoboWrench">RoboWrench</span> <span word="plumbing">plumbing</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="wholesale">wholesale</span> <span word="outlet">outlet</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="location">location</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="apparently">apparently</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="better">better</span>: <span word="RoboWrench">RoboWrench</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="neighboring">neighboring</span> <span word="city">city</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="article">article</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="Cafe">Cafe</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="relocating">relocating</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="supports">supports</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="pointing">pointing</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="volume">volume</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="moved">moved</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="RoboWrench">RoboWrench</span> <span word="plumbing">plumbing</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="outlet">outlet</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="location">location</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="apparently">apparently</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="owners">owners</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="outlet">outlet</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nearby">nearby</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="dissimilar">dissimilar</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span>. <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="location">location</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="suited">suited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hardware">hardware</span>, <span word="plumbing">plumbing</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cafes">cafes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="restaurants">restaurants</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="articles">articles</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="moving">moving</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="articles">articles</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="RoboWrench">RoboWrench</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="location">location</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="informed">informed</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="RoboWrench">RoboWrench</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="moved">moved</span>, <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="plumbing">plumbing</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="uninformative">uninformative</span> <span word="comparison">comparison</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="worthless">worthless</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="judge">judge</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wisdom">wisdom</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="relocate">relocate</span>.</p>
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