GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(九一)
<p> 91. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proposal">proposal</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span> <span word="University">University</span>.</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="difficulty">difficulty</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Greene">Greene</span> <span word="University">University</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="renamed">renamed</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="donor">donor</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="it">it</span> $100 <span word="million">million</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advertise">advertise</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="wealthy">wealthy</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="rename">rename</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="donors">donors</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="donations">donations</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> . . . <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="analogy">analogy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Greene">Greene</span> <span word="University">University</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Greene">Greene</span> <span word="University">University</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="named">named</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wealthy">wealthy</span> <span word="donor">donor</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rename">rename</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="exchange">exchange</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="donations">donations</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="tactic">tactic</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Greene">Greene</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="much">much</span>-<span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="rests">rests</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span>-<span word="producing">producing</span> <span word="strategy">strategy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="Greene">Greene</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Platonic">Platonic</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sufficiently">sufficiently</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="warrant">warrant</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span>, <span word="rural">rural</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="donations">donations</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span>, <span word="urban">urban</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="makeup">makeup</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="universities">universities</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="alumni">alumni</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assess">assess</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="likelihood">likelihood</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strategy">strategy</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="Greene">Greene</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="for">for</span></p>
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