GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一五七)
<p> 46. <span word="Businesses">Businesses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="governments">governments</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="bureaucracies">bureaucracies</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="bureaucracy">bureaucracy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="damaging">damaging</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="government">government</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="Contrary">Contrary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statements">statements</span> <span word="premise">premise</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="bureaucracies">bureaucracies</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="vulnerable">vulnerable</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="bureaucratic">bureaucratic</span> <span word="inefficiencies">inefficiencies</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="observation">observation</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="public">public</span> <span word="administrators">administrators</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="incentives">incentives</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="avoid">avoid</span> <span word="bureaucratic">bureaucratic</span> <span word="waste">waste</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="inefficiencies">inefficiencies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="inflicting">inflicting</span> <span word="damage">damage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="cuts">cuts</span>, <span word="diminishing">diminishing</span> <span word="common">common</span>-<span word="stock">stock</span> <span word="value">value</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="compensation">compensation</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ample">ample</span> <span word="incentives">incentives</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="firm">firm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="minimize">minimize</span> <span word="bureaucratic">bureaucratic</span> <span word="waste">waste</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="accountability">accountability</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="bureaucrats">bureaucrats</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="electorates">electorates</span> <span word="voting">voting</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="indirect">indirect</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="motivate">motivate</span> <span word="mid">mid</span>-<span word="level">level</span> <span word="administrators">administrators</span>, <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="salaries">salaries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="rarely">rarely</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="elections">elections</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="contrast">contrast</span>, <span word="private">private</span> <span word="corporations">corporations</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="shareholders">shareholders</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="power">power</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="stock">stock</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="value">value</span>.</p>
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