GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(九九)
<p> 99. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="compete">compete</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="design">design</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="focuses">focuses</span> <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="although">although</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="desired">desired</span> <span word="results">results</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="run">run</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="destructive">destructive</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="promoted">promoted</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="encourages">encourages</span> <span word="cooperative">cooperative</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>.</p><p> <span word="Granted">Granted</span>, <span word="competitiveness">competitiveness</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>. <span word="And">And</span>, <span word="properly">properly</span> <span word="directed">directed</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="motivate">motivate</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="mention">mention</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="deadlines">deadlines</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="fixes">fixes</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="focus">focus</span> <span word="externally">externally</span>, <span word="on">on</span> <span word="marking">marking</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="beating">beating</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="compete">compete</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="external">external</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="direct">direct</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="creative">creative</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="play">play</span> . <span word="Indeed">Indeed</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="competitive">competitive</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="cheating">cheating</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ruthless">ruthless</span> <span word="back">back</span>-<span word="stabbing">stabbing</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="organization">organization</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>-<span word="will">will</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="mistrust">mistrust</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="nations">nations</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extreme">extreme</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="war">war</span>.</p>
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