GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一四六)
<p> 35. <span word="Business">Business</span> <span word="relations">relations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="infected">infected</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disease">disease</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="sighted">sighted</span> <span word="motives">motives</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="goals">goals</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="look">look</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> <span word="Assuming">Assuming</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="relations">relations</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="refer">refer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="organization">organization</span>―<span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="association">association</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="corporation">corporation</span>―<span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="criticism">criticism</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="valid">valid</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span>, <span word="use">use</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="your">your</span> <span word="observation">observation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="infected">infected</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="sighted">sighted</span> <span word="motives">motives</span>. <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="immediate">immediate</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="goals">goals</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="critical">critical</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="survival">survival</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fledgling">fledgling</span> <span word="company">company</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="established">established</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="corporations">corporations</span>, <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="adequately">adequately</span> <span word="envision">envision</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="implications">implications</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="all">all</span>-<span word="too">too</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="appropriately">appropriately</span> <span word="characterized">characterized</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="disease">disease</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="replete">replete</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="envision">envision</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="long">long</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="implications">implications</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>. <span word="Businesses">Businesses</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="excessive">excessive</span> <span word="debt">debt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="booming">booming</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="ignoring">ignoring</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="slowdown">slowdown</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="forfeiture">forfeiture</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="bankruptcy">bankruptcy</span>. <span word="Software">Software</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="hastily">hastily</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="cash">cash</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="fad">fad</span>, <span word="ignoring">ignoring</span> <span word="bugs">bugs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="glitches">glitches</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span> <span word="drive">drive</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="away">away</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="inherently">inherently</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="corners">corners</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="term">term</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="failing">failing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="implications">implications</span>: <span word="class">class</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="liability">liability</span> <span word="suits">suits</span>, <span word="criminal">criminal</span> <span word="sanctions">sanctions</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="shareholder">shareholder</span> <span word="revolts">revolts</span>.</p>
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