GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(八四)
<p> 84. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="video">video</span>-<span word="game">game</span> <span word="hardware">hardware</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="software">software</span>. <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="B">B</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pioneer">pioneer</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="products">products</span>, <span word="was">was</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="a">a</span> $12 <span word="billion">billion</span>-<span word="a">a</span>-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="giant">giant</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="collapsed">collapsed</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="bored">bored</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="products">products</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="expected">expected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fail">fail</span>, <span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="games">games</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="exhausted">exhausted</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="portends">portends</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="fate">fate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="prediction">prediction</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="similarities">similarities</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="exist">exist</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="companies">companies</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="video">video</span>-<span word="game">game</span> <span word="hardware">hardware</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="products">products</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reliable">reliable</span> <span word="predictor">predictor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="similarities">similarities</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fate">fate</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="Bs">Bs</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="similarities">similarities</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="irrelevant">irrelevant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>. <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="B">B</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="fail">fail</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="produced">produced</span>; <span word="it">it</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="bored">bored</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="products">products</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="holds">holds</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="video">video</span>-<span word="game">game</span> <span word="hardware">hardware</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="software">software</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="fail">fail</span>.</p>
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