GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文七五
<p> 75. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="interest">interest</span>. <span word="This">This</span></p><p> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="belief">belief</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="beings">beings</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="essentially">essentially</span> <span word="selfish">selfish</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="egoistic">egoistic</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span></p><p> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="oversimplifies">oversimplifies</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>, <span word="ignoring">ignoring</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="motivating">motivating</span> <span word="force">force</span></p><p> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="altruism">altruism</span>.</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="self">self</span>-</p><p> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="survival">survival</span> <span word="instincts">instincts</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="fear">fear</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="vocational">vocational</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ensuring">ensuring</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="own">own</span></p><p> <span word="livelihood">livelihood</span>, <span word="safety">safety</span>, <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="perpetuate">perpetuate</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span></p><p> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="insecure">insecure</span>―<span word="or">or</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span>―<span word="of">of</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="course">course</span>.</p><p> <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="selfishness">selfishness</span>―</p><p> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fulfillment">fulfillment</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="easing">easing</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="age">age</span>.</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="assert">assert</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="essentially">essentially</span> <span word="motivated">motivated</span> <span word="by">by</span></p><p> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fear">fear</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="overemphasize">overemphasize</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="aspect">aspect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>. <span word="Humans">Humans</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span></p><p> <span word="altruistic">altruistic</span>―<span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="act">act</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="others">others</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span></p><p> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="interest">interest</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="altruistic">altruistic</span> <span word="acts">acts</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="egoistic">egoistic</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="in">in</span></p>
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