GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(五六)
<p> 56. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="codes">codes</span> <span word="governing">governing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="strict">strict</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="surest">surest</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="architects">architects</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="builders">builders</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="met">met</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minimum">minimum</span> <span word="requirements">requirements</span> <span word="established">established</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="codes">codes</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="construct">construct</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="currently">currently</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="hence">hence</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="evolution">evolution</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="architectural">architectural</span> <span word="styles">styles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="design">design</span>―<span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strictness">strictness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="codes">codes</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evolution">evolution</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="architectural">architectural</span> <span word="styles">styles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="design">design</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="minimized">minimized</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="imposition">imposition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="strict">strict</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="codes">codes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="inhibits">inhibits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evolution">evolution</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="architectural">architectural</span> <span word="styles">styles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="design">design</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="discourage">discourage</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="strictness">strictness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="codes">codes</span> <span word="governing">governing</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="discourages">discourages</span> <span word="technological">technological</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="surest">surest</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="architects">architects</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="builders">builders</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pass">pass</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="codes">codes</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="construct">construct</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="currently">currently</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="presented">presented</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="pertains">pertains</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span>, <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="draws">draws</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whole">whole</span>. <span word="Technological">Technological</span> <span word="innovation">innovation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="architectural">architectural</span> <span word="experimentation">experimentation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="style">style</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="design">design</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="precluded">precluded</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="cited">cited</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absence">absence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="beset">beset</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="privately">privately</span> <span word="owned">owned</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="warranted">warranted</span>.</p>
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