GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(五五)
<p> 55. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="club">club</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="publication">publication</span>.</p><p> <span word="After">After</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="members">members</span>, <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="built">built</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="indoor">indoor</span> <span word="pool">pool</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="appears">appears</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="club">club</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="adopt">adopt</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="approach">approach</span>―<span word="lowering">lowering</span> <span word="membership">membership</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="installing">installing</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="features">features</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="indoor">indoor</span> <span word="pool">pool</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cautions">cautions</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="dub">dub</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="installing">installing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span>, <span word="instead">instead</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="advised">advised</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="membership">membership</span> <span word="fees">fees</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="flawed">flawed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="installing">installing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sample">sample</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reliable">reliable</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>. <span word="Unless">Unless</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Heart">Heart</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="centers">centers</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="concluding">concluding</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="centers">centers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="results">results</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="indoor">indoor</span> <span word="pool">pool</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Hearts">Hearts</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span>. <span word="Perhaps">Perhaps</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Hearts">Hearts</span> <span word="members">members</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="primarily">primarily</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="body">body</span>-<span word="building">building</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="cardiovascular">cardiovascular</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="racquetball">racquetball</span>; <span word="or">or</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="swimming">swimming</span>. <span word="Reasons">Reasons</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="indoor">indoor</span> <span word="pool">pool</span> <span word="failed">failed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="usage">usage</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="failure">failure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="investigate">investigate</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="explanations">explanations</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Healthy">Healthy</span> <span word="Hearts">Hearts</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="renders">renders</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="suspect">suspect</span>.</p>
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