GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文五八
<p> 58. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="quotation">quotation</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ultimate">ultimate</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="streamline">streamline</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="mechanize">mechanize</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="minimizing">minimizing</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="have">have</span></p><p> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="instrumental">instrumental</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="distinct">distinct</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rest">rest</span></p><p> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="instrumental">instrumental</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="engage">engage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="leaving">leaving</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>―<span word="raising">raising</span></p><p> <span word="families">families</span>, <span word="participating">participating</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="civic">civic</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="traveling">traveling</span>, <span word="pursuing">pursuing</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="forth">forth</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="these">these</span></p><p> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="normally">normally</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="distinct">distinct</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="work">work</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="ends">ends</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span></p><p> <span word="engaging">engaging</span>, <span word="enjoyable">enjoyable</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="fulfilling">fulfilling</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="itself">itself</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="context">context</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="expressing">expressing</span></p><p> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="pan">pan</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="self">self</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="work">work</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="streamlined">streamlined</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="mechanized">mechanized</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="quick">quick</span> <span word="disposal">disposal</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quotation">quotation</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span>.</p><p> <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="monotonous">monotonous</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tedious">tedious</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="drones">drones</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="we">we</span></p><p> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="drone">drone</span>-<span word="like">like</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="process">process</span>.</p>
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