GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(六一)
<p> 61. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="letters">letters</span>-<span word="to">to</span>-<span word="the">the</span>-<span word="editor">editor</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span>.</p><p> <span word="Muscle">Muscle</span> <span word="Monthly">Monthly</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="regularly">regularly</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bodybuilders">bodybuilders</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="state">state</span>-<span word="of">of</span>-<span word="the">the</span>-<span word="art">art</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="machines">machines</span>, <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="sells">sells</span> <span word="out">out</span>, <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="owner">owner</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Skyview">Skyview</span> <span word="Newsstand">Newsstand</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="residents">residents</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="equip">equip</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="machines">machines</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="center">center</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="equipped">equipped</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span>-<span word="of">of</span>-<span word="the">the</span>-<span word="art">art</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="machines">machines</span> <span word="featured">featured</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Muscle">Muscle</span> <span word="Monthly">Monthly</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="offered">offered</span>: <span word="Muscle">Muscle</span> <span word="Monthly">Monthly</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bodybuilders">bodybuilders</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="machines">machines</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Muscle">Muscle</span> <span word="Monthly">Monthly</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="evidenced">evidenced</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="sells">sells</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="newsstand">newsstand</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="counts">counts</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="implication">implication</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bodybuilders">bodybuilders</span> <span word="pictured">pictured</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="machines">machines</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Muscle">Muscle</span> <span word="Monthly">Monthly</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="reached">reached</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="using">using</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="machines">machines</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="contention">contention</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bodybuilders">bodybuilders</span> <span word="pictured">pictured</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="equipment">equipment</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="workouts">workouts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="posing">posing</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="machines">machines</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="purposes">purposes</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="machines">machines</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="bodybuilding">bodybuilding</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="suitable">suitable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="residents">residents</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span>. <span word="Machines">Machines</span> <span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="muscle">muscle</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="cardiovascular">cardiovascular</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="machines">machines</span> <span word="pictured">pictured</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fitness">fitness</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="residents">residents</span>.</p>
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