GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(五十)
<p> 50. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="musical">musical</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="called">called</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span> <span word="financially">financially</span>, <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="therefore">therefore</span> <span word="diversify">diversify</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="plays">plays</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="concert">concert</span> <span word="tours">tours</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="albums">albums</span>, <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="series">series</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="posters">posters</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accessories">accessories</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="contract">contract</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="agency">agency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="endorse">endorse</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="products">products</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="believes">believes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attaining">attaining</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="group">group</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="diversify">diversify</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="analogy">analogy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="better">better</span>-<span word="known">known</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="plays">plays</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span>. <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="participates">participates</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="promotional">promotional</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="concerts">concerts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="albums">albums</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="name">name</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Zapped">Zapped</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="apt">apt</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="rock">rock</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="leaves">leaves</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="music">music</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="comparable">comparable</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="Zonkeds">Zonkeds</span> <span word="performance">performance</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sufficiently">sufficiently</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Zappeds">Zappeds</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="toward">toward</span> <span word="explaining">explaining</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="Zonked">Zonked</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="known">known</span>.</p>
页:
[1]