GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文四六
<p> 24. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="customer">customer</span>-<span word="service">service</span> <span word="division">division</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span> <span word="Savings">Savings</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Loan">Loan</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bank">bank</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="differentiate">differentiate</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="its">its</span></p><p> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>―<span word="specifically">specifically</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="waiting">waiting</span></p><p> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="teller">teller</span> <span word="lines">lines</span>, <span word="opening">opening</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="business">business</span> 30 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="earlier">earlier</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="closing">closing</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="hour">hour</span> <span word="later">later</span>.</p><p> <span word="These">These</span> <span word="improvements">improvements</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="argued">argued</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bank">bank</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="edge">edge</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="appear">appear</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="customer">customer</span>-<span word="friendly">friendly</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>; <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="concerns">concerns</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="addressed">addressed</span>, <span word="however">however</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Mammons">Mammons</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span> <span word="in">in</span></p><p> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="respects">respects</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="listed">listed</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="Mammons">Mammons</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span></p><p> <span word="conveniently">conveniently</span> <span word="located">located</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="customers">customers</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="attractive">attractive</span></p><p> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="edge">edge</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seeks">seeks</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="by">by</span></p><p> <span word="enhancing">enhancing</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="services">services</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proposed">proposed</span> <span word="improvements">improvements</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="sufficiently">sufficiently</span></p><p> <span word="distinguish">distinguish</span> <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="competitors">competitors</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="necessarily">necessarily</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="Mammons">Mammons</span></p><p> <span word="competitors">competitors</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="already">already</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offer">offer</span>, <span word="essentially">essentially</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="customer">customer</span>-</p><p> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span> <span word="proposes">proposes</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="itself">itself</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="Mammon">Mammon</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="the">the</span></p>
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