GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文四五
<p> 25. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="L">L</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>, <span word="affordable">affordable</span> <span word="housing">housing</span>, <span word="friendly">friendly</span></p><p> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="flourishing">flourishing</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="safe">safe</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="an">an</span></p><p> <span word="annual">annual</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="ranks">ranks</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="L">L</span> <span word="was">was</span></p><p> <span word="listed">listed</span> 14<span word="th">th</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="survey">survey</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="stands">stands</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="characteristics">characteristics</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="used">used</span></p><p> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="criteria">criteria</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ranking">ranking</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="criteria">criteria</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="features">features</span> <span word="listed">listed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="b">b</span></p><p> <span word="warranted">warranted</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="employed">employed</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="criteria">criteria</span>―<span word="for">for</span></p><p> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="outdoor">outdoor</span> <span word="recreational">recreational</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="achievement">achievement</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="adult">adult</span></p><p> <span word="residents">residents</span>―<span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="wholly">wholly</span> <span word="unwarranted">unwarranted</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="indication">indication</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="characteristic">characteristic</span> <span word="was">was</span></p><p> <span word="weighted">weighted</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ranking">ranking</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="City">City</span> <span word="L">L</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span></p><p> <span word="flourishing">flourishing</span> <span word="arts">arts</span> <span word="scene">scene</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="surveyed">surveyed</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>,</p><p> <span word="unfriendly">unfriendly</span> <span word="people">people</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unsafe">unsafe</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span></p><p> <span word="accurately">accurately</span> <span word="reflects">reflects</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="Ls">Ls</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="on">on</span></p>
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