GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（七）
<p> 7.<span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="trends">trends</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lifestyles">lifestyles</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artificial">artificial</span> <span word="sweetener">sweetener</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="loss">loss</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trigger">trigger</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="craving">craving</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="depleting">depleting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="brain">brain</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="registers">registers</span> <span word="satiety">satiety</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="full">full</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sugars">sugars</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="consumed">consumed</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 45 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="continuous">continuous</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bodys">bodys</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="burn">burn</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="drink">drink</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span>-<span word="sweetened">sweetened</span> <span word="juices">juices</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="calorie">calorie</span>-<span word="burning">burning</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="appears">appears</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dietary">dietary</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artificial">artificial</span> <span word="sweetener">sweetener</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="triggering">triggering</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="cravings">cravings</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="enhances">enhances</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bodys">bodys</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="burn">burn</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>. <span word="Neither">Neither</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="encourages">encourages</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="cravings">cravings</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="findings">findings</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="deplete">deplete</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="brain">brain</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="registering">registering</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="sated">sated</span> , <span word="or">or</span> <span word="full">full</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="generalization">generalization</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unreliable">unreliable</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sample">sample</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="administered">administered</span>; <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="applies">applies</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="findings">findings</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="target">target</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="includes">includes</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="users">users</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="consume">consume</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artificial">artificial</span> <span word="sweetener">sweetener</span>.</p>
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