GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(五二)
<p> 52. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Elm">Elm</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="paper">paper</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="opened">opened</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="closed">closed</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="acute">acute</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="shortage">shortage</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="arrests">arrests</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="crime">crime</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vagrancy">vagrancy</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nearby">nearby</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="Park">Park</span>. <span word="Elm">Elm</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="deny">deny</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="application">application</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Elm">Elm</span> <span word="City">City</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="done">done</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="opened">opened</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="closed">closed</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="acute">acute</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="shortage">shortage</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="malls">malls</span> <span word="owner">owner</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nearby">nearby</span> <span word="Elm">Elm</span> <span word="City">City</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="derived">derived</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="returned">returned</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="coupled">coupled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="trash">trash</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="litter">litter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nearby">nearby</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="park">park</span>, <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="judgment">judgment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="rebukes">rebukes</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="construction">construction</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="shopping">shopping</span> <span word="mall">mall</span>. <span word="Citing">Citing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="benefited">benefited</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="exercised">exercised</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="judgment">judgment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="allowing">allowing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mail">mail</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="built">built</span>. <span word="Among">Among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="closure">closure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span>, <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="downtown">downtown</span> <span word="area">area</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="trash">trash</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="litter">litter</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="park">park</span> <span word="near">near</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="derived">derived</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="benefiting">benefiting</span> <span word="Oak">Oak</span> <span word="City">City</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="owner">owner</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mall">mall</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p>
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