GMAT考试：Argument写作范文三十
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="contends">contends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="regulation">regulation</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="regulatory">regulatory</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="solved">solved</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="scientists">scientists</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="elements">elements</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="gives">gives</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="eliminated">eliminated</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="potentially">potentially</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quantity">quantity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="actual">actual</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="deposits">deposits</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="pollution">pollution</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="created">created</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="synthetic">synthetic</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="substitutes">substitutes</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="eliminated">eliminated</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="substitutes">substitutes</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scope">scope</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="premises">premises</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wording">wording</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="regulation">regulation</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span>, <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="premises">premises</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="only">only</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="mined">mined</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="copper">copper</span>; <span word="advances">advances</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="synthesis">synthesis</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="likelihood">likelihood</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="bearing">bearing</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="regulation">regulation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="changed">changed</span>.</p><p> <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="slow">slow</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="once">once</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="chemically">chemically</span> <span word="synthesized">synthesized</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="substantiate">substantiate</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="synthesis">synthesis</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="incentives">incentives</span>, <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="regulatory">regulatory</span> <span word="ones">ones</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="slow">slow</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="copper">copper</span> <span word="mining">mining</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="word">word</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="mining">mining</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="remain">remain</span>.</p>
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