GMAT考试：Argument写作范文二十三
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="million">million</span> <span word="dollars">dollars</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movie">movie</span> 3003 <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="producers">producers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="amounts">amounts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="films">films</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="successful">successful</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="that">that</span> 3003 <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="stars">stars</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="involves">involves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="films">films</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="Goods">Goods</span> <span word="participation">participation</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="Robinhandsomely">Robinhandsomely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="star">star</span> <span word="in">in</span> 3003. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="contention">contention</span>.</p><p> <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="previously">previously</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span>, <span word="other">other</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mere">mere</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="their">their</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="photography">photography</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="plot">plot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="story">story</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="director">director</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="combination">combination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="detailed">detailed</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="thereasons">thereasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="movies">movies</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="folly">folly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="presume">presume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Robins">Robins</span> <span word="participation">participation</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="weak">weak</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="hiring">hiring</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="producers">producers</span> <span word="of">of</span> 3003 <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="movies">movies</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="previously">previously</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="resulted">resulted</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Robin">Robin</span> <span word="starred">starred</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p>
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