GMAT考试：Argument写作范文二十一
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="warns">warns</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="stronger">stronger</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="systems">systems</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="copied">copied</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sold">sold</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="imitators">imitators</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="eventual">eventual</span> <span word="loss">loss</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="chain">chain</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span>: <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="protection">protection</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stronger">stronger</span> <span word="laws">laws</span>, <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="naturallyinvest">naturallyinvest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="technologies">technologies</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>, <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="investment">investment</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="back">back</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="investment">investment</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="marketability">marketability</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="result">result</span>. <span word="This">This</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="predicted">predicted</span> <span word="loss">loss</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="copyright">copyright</span>, <span word="patent">patent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="secret">secret</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="security">security</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="design">design</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="explains">explains</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="laws">laws</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="protection">protection</span>, <span word="nor">nor</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="offer">offer</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="twin">twin</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="stronger">stronger</span> <span word="legal">legal</span> <span word="protection">protection</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="manufacturers">manufacturers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="invest">invest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="security">security</span>-<span word="system">system</span> <span word="production">production</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absence">absence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="legal">legal</span> <span word="protection">protection</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opposite">opposite</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="accepting">accepting</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="cause">cause</span>-<span word="and">and</span>-<span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="connections">connections</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="law">law</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="happens">happens</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="marketplace">marketplace</span>.</p>
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