GMAT考试：Argument写作范文七
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="attempt">attempt</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="profitable">profitable</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="Cafe">Cafe</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="station">station</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="alone">alone</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="Cafe">Cafe</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="overlooks">overlooks</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="contributed">contributed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="success">success</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="owners">owners</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="chefs">chefs</span>; <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="launched">launched</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="coupon">coupon</span> <span word="ad">ad</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="print">print</span> <span word="media">media</span>; <span word="or">or</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="changed">changed</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="updated">updated</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="menu">menu</span>. <span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="competitor">competitor</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="explain">explain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="growth">growth</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eliminate">eliminate</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="possibilities">possibilities</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="accepted">accepted</span>.</p><p> <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="granted">granted</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquats">Cumquats</span> <span word="success">success</span>, <span word="another">another</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Cumquat">Cumquat</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="likewise">likewise</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="kinds">kinds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="cafes">cafes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="audiences">audiences</span> <span word="react">react</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="safely">safely</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="restaurant">restaurant</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="benefited">benefited</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="radio">radio</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span>, <span word="that">that</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="similarly">similarly</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span>.</p>
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