GMAT考试：Argument写作范文一
<p> <span word="Citing">Citing</span> <span word="facts">facts</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="color">color</span>-<span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="downward">downward</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="a">a</span> 24-<span word="year">year</span> <span word="period">period</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="likewise">likewise</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="minimize">minimize</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="maximize">maximize</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="principle">principle</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="organizations">organizations</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="better">better</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="principle">principle</span>, <span word="coupled">coupled</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="OlympicFoods">OlympicFoods</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="had">had</span> 25 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="leads">leads</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="rosy">rosy</span> <span word="prediction">prediction</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="flaws">flaws</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="forecast">forecast</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="minimal">minimal</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="maximum">maximum</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="rests">rests</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gratuitous">gratuitous</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="better">better</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="guarantee">guarantee</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="Nor">Nor</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cite">cite</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="likely">likely</span>, <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Foods">Foods</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="its">its</span> 25 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span>-<span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="expectation">expectation</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="unfounded">unfounded</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="doubtful">doubtful</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="facts">facts</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="color">color</span>-<span word="film">film</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="applicable">applicable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>. <span word="Differences">Differences</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="industries">industries</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="similarities">similarities</span>, <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="analogy">analogy</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="valid">valid</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="spoilage">spoilage</span>, <span word="contamination">contamination</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="timely">timely</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="virtually">virtually</span> <span word="absent">absent</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="film">film</span>-<span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span>. <span word="Problems">Problems</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="insurmountable">insurmountable</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="prevent">prevent</span> <span word="lowering">lowering</span> <span word="food">food</span>-<span word="processing">processing</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p>
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