GMAT考试写作例文224篇连载(一四五)
<p> 34. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="perform">perform</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="specified">specified</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="participants">participants</span>.</p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="above">above</span>. <span word="Support">Support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="potential">potential</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mandatory">mandatory</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="weighed">weighed</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="administrative">administrative</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="concerns">concerns</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="liberty">liberty</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="balance">balance</span> , <span word="the">the</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nation">nation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="participants">participants</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="exceed">exceed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="colorable">colorable</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="mandatory">mandatory</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="alleviate">alleviate</span> <span word="free">free</span>-<span word="rider">rider</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="do">do</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="mitigate">mitigate</span> <span word="pressing">pressing</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>―<span word="with">with</span> <span word="education">education</span>, <span word="public">public</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="instill">instill</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="participants">participants</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="civic">civic</span> <span word="duty">duty</span>, <span word="community">community</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="worked">worked</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="smaller">smaller</span> <span word="scale">scale</span>, <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="urban">urban</span> <span word="areas">areas</span>, <span word="where">where</span> <span word="renewal">renewal</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="succeed">succeed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="communities">communities</span> <span word="safer">safer</span>, <span word="healthier">healthier</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="prosperous">prosperous</span>.</p><p> <span word="Far">Far</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="compelling">compelling</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="arguments">arguments</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="mandatory">mandatory</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="assignments">assignments</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="decide">decide</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="worthwhile">worthwhile</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="compliance">compliance</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="assured">assured</span>? <span word="Resolving">Resolving</span> <span word="enforcement">enforcement</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="control">control</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="requiring">requiring</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="taxes">taxes</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="cuts">cuts</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="programs">programs</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="nullifying">nullifying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mandatory">mandatory</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mandatory">mandatory</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="open">open</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="floodgates">floodgates</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="incompetence">incompetence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="inexperience">inexperience</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="notion">notion</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="tantamount">tantamount</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Communism">Communism</span> <span word="insofar">insofar</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="citizen">citizen</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span>, <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="ability">ability</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="state">state</span>. <span word="Modern">Modern</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="informs">informs</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="systems">systems</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="mandatory">mandatory</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="labor">labor</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="dollars">dollars</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="compulsory">compulsory</span> <span word="labor">labor</span> <span word="smacks">smacks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="involuntary">involuntary</span> <span word="servitude">servitude</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="taxes">taxes</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span>.</p>
页:
[1]