GMAT Argument经典范文赏析（3）
<p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文范文，是被历年考生竞相追逐的对象，<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文范文的香饽饽效应实属必然，既然是<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文范文，其示范性是不言而喻的。<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文范文虽然不能穷举，但是本文还是重磅推出<span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文范文系列经典案例，希望考生阅后，能有自己认真的总结。</p><p> <span word="GMAT">GMAT</span>作文范文7：<span word="Argument">Argument</span></p><p> 7. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="section">section</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="trends">trends</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lifestyles">lifestyles</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artificial">artificial</span> <span word="sweetener">sweetener</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="weight">weight</span> <span word="loss">loss</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="trigger">trigger</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="craving">craving</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="depleting">depleting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="brain">brain</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="chemical">chemical</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="registers">registers</span> <span word="satiety">satiety</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="full">full</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sugars">sugars</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="consumed">consumed</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 45 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="continuous">continuous</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bodys">bodys</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="burn">burn</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="drink">drink</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span>-<span word="sweetened">sweetened</span> <span word="juices">juices</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="lose">lose</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="calorie">calorie</span>-<span word="burning">burning</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="appears">appears</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="consuming">consuming</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="unlikely">unlikely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="achieve">achieve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="dietary">dietary</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>。 <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> . . . <span word="Etc">Etc</span>。</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="artificial">artificial</span> <span word="sweetener">sweetener</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="viewpoints">viewpoints</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="high">high</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="more">more</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="fat">fat</span>-<span word="burning">burning</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="properly">properly</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="reader">reader</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="side">side</span>-<span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="cant">cant</span> <span word="prove">prove</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sugar">sugar</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="aspartame">aspartame</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="weight">weight</span>-<span word="control">control</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>。</p>
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