GMAT考试：Argument写作范文二十二
<p> 43.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="private">private</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="bases">bases</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span>: <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="employ">employ</span> 15 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span>; <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> 20 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="treating">treating</span> <span word="patients">patients</span>; <span word="they">they</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="staffs">staffs</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="money">money</span>; <span word="they">they</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="profit">profit</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="utilize">utilize</span> <span word="doctors">doctors</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="divide">divide</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="betweenteaching">betweenteaching</span>, <span word="research">research</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="treating">treating</span> <span word="patients">patients</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="rgument">rgument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="egregious">egregious</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="error">error</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="pertaining">pertaining</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="generalization">generalization</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="underlying">underlying</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="operative">operative</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="inference">inference</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="representative">representative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="gratuitous">gratuitous</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="treating">treating</span> <span word="patients">patients</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="unless">unless</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="treated">treated</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="suffered">suffered</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="maladies">maladies</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="university">university</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="routinely">routinely</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="patients">patients</span> <span word="suffering">suffering</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="rare">rare</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="treat">treat</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="suffer">suffer</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="illnesses">illnesses</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="indicative">indicative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="received">received</span>.</p>
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