GMAT考试：Argument写作范文十二
<p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="draws">draws</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="substantially">substantially</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="remained">remained</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="constant">constant</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="thirds">thirds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Einsteins">Einsteins</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="concept">concept</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="synonymous">synonymous</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="But">But</span>, <span word="normally">normally</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span>; <span word="we">we</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>―<span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="secondary">secondary</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="essentially">essentially</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>.</p><p> <span word="Given">Given</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="clarification">clarification</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="educating">educating</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="reflect">reflect</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="secondary">secondary</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reality">reality</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="entry">entry</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="desirable">desirable</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>.</p>
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