GMAT考试：Argument写作范文六
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="endorsed">endorsed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span> <span word="vote">vote</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="office">office</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="re">re</span>-<span word="elect">elect</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span> <span word="Varro">Varro</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="Montoyas">Montoyas</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="decreased">decreased</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="Varros">Varros</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="grew">grew</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="involves">involves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sort">sort</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="gross">gross</span> <span word="oversimplification">oversimplification</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="emotional">emotional</span> <span word="appeal">appeal</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="rhetoric">rhetoric</span>; <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="administration">administration</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="loss">loss</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="elected">elected</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="population">population</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="event">event</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latter">latter</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fallacious">fallacious</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="unless">unless</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="causal">causal</span> <span word="explanations">explanations</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ruled">ruled</span> <span word="out">out</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="statewide">statewide</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="nationwide">nationwide</span> <span word="recession">recession</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="events">events</span>. <span word="Or">Or</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="downturn">downturn</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="picture">picture</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="cycles">cycles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="happens">happens</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span>. <span word="Yet">Yet</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Varro">Varro</span> <span word="enjoyed">enjoyed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="stability">stability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Varros">Varros</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="administration">administration</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stage">stage</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="Montoya">Montoya</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="job">job</span> <span word="availability">availability</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="affect">affect</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="emotionally">emotionally</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="intentionally">intentionally</span> <span word="oversimplified">oversimplified</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="angering">angering</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="San">San</span> <span word="Perdito">Perdito</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="turning">turning</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="against">against</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="incumbent">incumbent</span> <span word="mayor">mayor</span>. <span word="Arguments">Arguments</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="bypass">bypass</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span>, <span word="complex">complex</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="favor">favor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stirring">stirring</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="emotions">emotions</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="conclusions">conclusions</span>; <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="unfair">unfair</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="parties">parties</span> <span word="involved">involved</span>.</p>
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