GMAT考试：Issue写作范文二
<p> 3.</p><p> <span word="Which">Which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="classify">classify</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reward">reward</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="business">business</span>: <span word="a">a</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="organizational">organizational</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hierarchical">hierarchical</span> <span word="structure">structure</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="prefers">prefers</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="distinctions">distinctions</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="monetary">monetary</span> <span word="rewards">rewards</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speakers">speakers</span> <span word="preference">preference</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="collegiality">collegiality</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hierarchical">hierarchical</span> <span word="one">one</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="everyday">everyday</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="interaction">interaction</span>. <span word="Disagreements">Disagreements</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="coworkers">coworkers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="inevitable">inevitable</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="authoritative">authoritative</span> <span word="figure">figure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="resolve">resolve</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="decisions">decisions</span>, <span word="disputes">disputes</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="unresolved">unresolved</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="worsen">worsen</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="undermining">undermining</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span>, <span word="congeniality">congeniality</span> <span word="and">and</span>, <span word="ultimately">ultimately</span>, <span word="productivity">productivity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="profit">profit</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="collegiality">collegiality</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="fostered">fostered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="organizational">organizational</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="beside">beside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="point">point</span>. <span word="My">My</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="rejecting">rejecting</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="organizational">organizational</span> <span word="structure">structure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="distinguish">distinguish</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="under">under</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="incentive">incentive</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>, <span word="accomplish">accomplish</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="work">work</span>-<span word="related">related</span> <span word="goals">goals</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="completion">completion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="assigned">assigned</span> <span word="tasks">tasks</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>, <span word="human">human</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="enticements">enticements</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="status">status</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="recognition">recognition</span>, <span word="few">few</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="accomplish">accomplish</span> <span word="anything">anything</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="assume">assume</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="task">task</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="flat">flat</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="distinct">distinct</span> <span word="disincentive">disincentive</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="insofar">insofar</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="accountable">accountable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="quantity">quantity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="work">work</span>. <span word="By">By</span> <span word="ignoring">ignoring</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="nature">nature</span>, <span word="then">then</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="harming">harming</span> <span word="itself">itself</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="encouraging">encouraging</span> <span word="laziness">laziness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="complacency">complacency</span>.</p>
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