GMAT考试：Argument写作范文三十八
<p> 75.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="improvements">improvements</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="paid">paid</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="developers">developers</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="taxpayers">taxpayers</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="developers">developers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citys">citys</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="developers">developers</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="fair">fair</span> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="services">services</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="win">win</span> <span word="approval">approval</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="tantamount">tantamount</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="robbery">robbery</span>. <span word="City">City</span> <span word="officials">officials</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="justify">justify</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="endorsed">endorsed</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="practice">practice</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="adoption">adoption</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="practice">practice</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="discourage">discourage</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citys">citys</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="offset">offset</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="projects">projects</span> <span word="generate">generate</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span>, <span word="unless">unless</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="demonstrate">demonstrate</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="incur">incur</span> <span word="expenses">expenses</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="covered">covered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="projects">projects</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unfounded">unfounded</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="harmed">harmed</span> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="approving">approving</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="projects">projects</span>.</p>
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