GMAT考试：Argument写作范文十七
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Perks">Perks</span> <span word="Companys">Companys</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="funds">funds</span> <span word="currently">currently</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="package">package</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="redirected">redirected</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="upgrade">upgrade</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="machinery">machinery</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="plant">plant</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="generous">generous</span> <span word="package">package</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="incentives">incentives</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>-<span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="rates">rates</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Perks">Perks</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="incentives">incentives</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="merit">merit</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="close">close</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="periods">periods</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pay">pay</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sound">sound</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="sense">sense</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="particular">particular</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Perks">Perks</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="involved">involved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="representative">representative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="generally">generally</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="unemployed">unemployed</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="qualifications">qualifications</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="match">match</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="openings">openings</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Perks">Perks</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="easier">easier</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>-<span word="founded">founded</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>-<span word="effectiveness">effectiveness</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wage">wage</span> <span word="policy">policy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="whatever">whatever</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="currently">currently</span> <span word="bear">bear</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="overlooks">overlooks</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="peripheral">peripheral</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="eliminating">eliminating</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="Perks">Perks</span> <span word="eliminates">eliminates</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>; <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="productive">productive</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="quit">quit</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="Perks">Perks</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="readily">readily</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="training">training</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="productivity">productivity</span> <span word="associated">associated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="turnover">turnover</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="redirecting">redirecting</span> <span word="funds">funds</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="construction">construction</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="reduction">reduction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fund">fund</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="retrofitting">retrofitting</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> <span word="plant">plant</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reduction">reduction</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="presumably">presumably</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sizable">sizable</span> <span word="one">one</span>; <span word="consequently">consequently</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="turnover">turnover</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="associated">associated</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reduction">reduction</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="indeed">indeed</span>.</p>
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