GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（十四）
<p> 14. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span>. <span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="Nova">Nova</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="dropout">dropout</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="reported">reported</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="impressive">impressive</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="college">college</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="future">future</span> <span word="budgets">budgets</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="board">board</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="portion">portion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="funds">funds</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="computers">computers</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="district">district</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="adopt">adopt</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="curriculum">curriculum</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> 1:</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="board">board</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="computers">computers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="adopt">adopt</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="logically">logically</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="dropout">dropout</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="adoption">adoption</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="true">true</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span>. <span word="Or">Or</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span>. <span word="Or">Or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dropout">dropout</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="attributed">attributed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="discipline">discipline</span> <span word="applied">applied</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span>.</p><p> <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="supposing">supposing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Nova">Nova</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="Schools">Schools</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="dropout">dropout</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="directly">directly</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="usage">usage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interactive">interactive</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="suit">suit</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="instruction">instruction</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="work">work</span>.</p>
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