GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（十五）
<p> 15. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seeking">seeking</span> <span word="reelection">reelection</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="governor">governor</span>. <span word="Re">Re</span>-<span word="elect">elect</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="voting">voting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="proven">proven</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>. <span word="Over">Over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="alone">alone</span>, <span word="seventy">seventy</span> <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="increases">increases</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="wages">wages</span>, <span word="five">five</span> <span word="thousand">thousand</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="created">created</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="corporations">corporations</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="located">located</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="headquarters">headquarters</span> <span word="here">here</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="poll">poll</span> <span word="said">said</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="reelected">reelected</span>. <span word="Adamss">Adamss</span> <span word="opponent">opponent</span>, <span word="Zebulon">Zebulon</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="direction">direction</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Zebulon">Zebulon</span> <span word="disagrees">disagrees</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Adamss">Adamss</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="policies">policies</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="advertisement">advertisement</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="re">re</span>-<span word="electing">electing</span> <span word="Governor">Governor</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="proven">proven</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span>: <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="wages">wages</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="gone">gone</span> <span word="up">up</span>; 5,000 <span word="new">new</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="created">created</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="corporations">corporations</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="located">located</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span>. <span word="Another">Another</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="re">re</span>-<span word="electing">electing</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="poll">poll</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="re">re</span>-<span word="elected">elected</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="rival">rival</span> <span word="Zebulon">Zebulon</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="disagrees">disagrees</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="fiscal">fiscal</span> <span word="policies">policies</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="fraught">fraught</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="vague">vague</span>, <span word="oversimplified">oversimplified</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unwarranted">unwarranted</span> <span word="claims">claims</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="economically">economically</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Adams">Adams</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="governor">governor</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="oversimplified">oversimplified</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="distort">distort</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="picture">picture</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="state">state</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="raises">raises</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="minuscule">minuscule</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="kept">kept</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="cost">cost</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="states">states</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="the">the</span> 5,000 <span word="new">new</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="unemployment">unemployment</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span>; <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lost">lost</span>. <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poll">poll</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="corporations">corporations</span> <span word="located">located</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="state">state</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="left">left</span>.</p>
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