GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文七二
<p> 18. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="head">head</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="strengthen">strengthen</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="ethics">ethics</span> <span word="regulations">regulations</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="enforcement">enforcement</span></p><p> <span word="mechanisms">mechanisms</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="encourage">encourage</span> <span word="ethical">ethical</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span></p><p> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="agreed">agreed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ethics">ethics</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="relevant">relevant</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unacceptable">unacceptable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span></p><p> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="sole">sole</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="stronger">stronger</span> <span word="enforcement">enforcement</span> <span word="mechanisms">mechanisms</span> <span word="are">are</span></p><p> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span> <span word="comes">comes</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="simply">simply</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="promises">promises</span></p><p> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="follow">follow</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="code">code</span>. <span word="But">But</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="head">head</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="refers">refers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rules">rules</span></p><p> <span word="violations">violations</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="his">his</span> <span word="faith">faith</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="word">word</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="obviously">obviously</span> <span word="misplaced">misplaced</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="commonly">commonly</span> <span word="understood">understood</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="effective">effective</span> <span word="rules">rules</span> <span word="carry">carry</span></p><p> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="enforcement">enforcement</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="penalties">penalties</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="violations">violations</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strengthened">strengthened</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="head">head</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ethics">ethics</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="partial">partial</span> <span word="clarification">clarification</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="term">term</span></p><p> <span word="relevant">relevant</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="code">code</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="approved">approved</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="direct">direct</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="to">to</span></p>
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