GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文九
<p> 9. <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="behind">behind</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="enter">enter</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="suggests">suggests</span> <span word="here">here</span>? <span word="While">While</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span></p><p> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="interfere">interfere</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="integrating">integrating</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="foster">foster</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span> <span word="ambiance">ambiance</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span></p><p> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="job">job</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="organization">organization</span>.</p><p> <span word="Engaging">Engaging</span> <span word="coworkers">coworkers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="occasional">occasional</span> <span word="conversation">conversation</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="interests">interests</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="collegiality">collegiality</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="coworkers">coworkers</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="adds">adds</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="job">job</span>. <span word="Managers">Managers</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="advised">advised</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="participate">participate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sharing">sharing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="information">information</span>―<span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="leadership">leadership</span> <span word="tool">tool</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span></p><p> <span word="morale">morale</span> <span word="booster">booster</span>. <span word="An">An</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="feels">feels</span> <span word="valued">valued</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boss">boss</span> <span word="takes">takes</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="employee">employee</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="loyal">loyal</span></p><p> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cooperative">cooperative</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="boss">boss</span>. <span word="Company">Company</span>-<span word="sponsored">sponsored</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="picnics">picnics</span>, <span word="parties">parties</span>,</p><p> <span word="excursions">excursions</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="forth">forth</span>―<span word="also">also</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="produce">produce</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="cohesiveness">cohesiveness</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="organization">organization</span>,</p><p> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="bond">bond</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="ways">ways</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="translate">translate</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="relationships">relationships</span>.</p>
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