GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文四二
<p> 28. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="transit">transit</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="tares">tares</span> <span word="for">for</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span> <span word="buses">buses</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="transport">transport</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="then">then</span>- <span word="subway">subway</span> <span word="stations">stations</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="fees">fees</span></p><p> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="stations">stations</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="commuter">commuter</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="subway">subway</span> <span word="train">train</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="exceeding">exceeding</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="transit">transit</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="expectations">expectations</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="commuter">commuter</span> <span word="use">use</span></p><p> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="shuffle">shuffle</span> <span word="buses">buses</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="projected">projected</span> <span word="volume">volume</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="because">because</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="oversimplifies">oversimplifies</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="solutions">solutions</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="ways">ways</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="by">by</span> <span word="concluding">concluding</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="transit">transit</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="either">either</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span></p><p> <span word="fares">fares</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="fees">fees</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="available">available</span></p><p> <span word="solutions">solutions</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="limited">limited</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span> <span word="use">use</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="other">other</span></p><p> <span word="factors">factors</span>-<span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="inconvenient">inconvenient</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span> <span word="routing">routing</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="scheduling">scheduling</span>, <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="concerns">concerns</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="an">an</span></p><p> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="carpools">carpools</span>―<span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="adjusting">adjusting</span> <span word="fares">fares</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="fees">fees</span></p><p> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="parking">parking</span></p><p> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="mutually">mutually</span> <span word="exclusive">exclusive</span> <span word="alternatives">alternatives</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span></p><p> <span word="imposing">imposing</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="either">either</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="choice">choice</span>. <span word="Adjusting">Adjusting</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="shuttle">shuttle</span> <span word="fares">fares</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="parking">parking</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="might">might</span></p>
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