GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文八二
<p> 82. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="here">here</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="meet">meet</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="goals">goals</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="insofar">insofar</span> <span word="as">as</span></p><p> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accommodate">accommodate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="role">role</span></p><p> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="mothers">mothers</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="fair">fair</span></p><p> <span word="share">share</span> <span word="otherwise">otherwise</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span>.</p><p> <span word="Women">Women</span> <span word="differ">differ</span> <span word="fundamentally">fundamentally</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="men">men</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="child">child</span>-<span word="bearing">bearing</span> <span word="ability">ability</span>. <span word="Related">Related</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="maternal">maternal</span> <span word="instinct">instinct</span>―<span word="a">a</span> <span word="desire">desire</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="nurture">nurture</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="stronger">stronger</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="women">women</span></p><p> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="men">men</span>, <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="speaking">speaking</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="minimum">minimum</span>, <span word="then">then</span>, <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="acknowledge">acknowledge</span></p><p> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="fundamental">fundamental</span> <span word="differences">differences</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="accommodate">accommodate</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="female">female</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="job">job</span></p><p> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="jeopardized">jeopardized</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="fulfilling">fulfilling</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="instinctive">instinctive</span> <span word="role">role</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="female">female</span>.</p><p> <span word="More">More</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="providing">providing</span> <span word="maternal">maternal</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>, <span word="day">day</span>-<span word="care">care</span></p><p> <span word="facilities">facilities</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="job">job</span>-<span word="sharing">sharing</span> <span word="programs">programs</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accommodate">accommodate</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span>. <span word="In">In</span></p><p> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="observation">observation</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="businesses">businesses</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="beyond">beyond</span> <span word="accommodating">accommodating</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="fundamental">fundamental</span> <span word="differences">differences</span>, <span word="neither">neither</span> <span word="business">business</span></p><p> <span word="nor">nor</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="status">status</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span>.</p>
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