GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（九）
<p> 9. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span> <span word="column">column</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="magazine">magazine</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="devote">devote</span> 39 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="only">only</span> 25 <span word="percent">percent</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="dramatically">dramatically</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>, <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="expect">expect</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="advantage">advantage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>, <span word="these">these</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="intended">intended</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumer">consumer</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> 1:</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> 10 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thus">thus</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="logically">logically</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="omits">omits</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="crucial">crucial</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span></p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absolute">absolute</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="devoted">devoted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span>. <span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="smaller">smaller</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="retail">retail</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="store">store</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="absolute">absolute</span> <span word="amount">amount</span>.</p><p> <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="spending">spending</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="ignores">ignores</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="within">within</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="decade">decade</span>. <span word="Younger">Younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="shop">shop</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="types">types</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="stores">stores</span>, <span word="too">too</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="expenditure">expenditure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="stores">stores</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="middle">middle</span>-<span word="aged">aged</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>.</p>
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