GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文二四
<p> 84. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Nostrum">Nostrum</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="implementing">implementing</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="retirement">retirement</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="unjustified">unjustified</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span>―</p><p> <span word="financially">financially</span> <span word="unjustified">unjustified</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preceding">preceding</span> <span word="years">years</span>,</p><p> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="unnecessary">unnecessary</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="Nostrums">Nostrums</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="competitor">competitor</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="its">its</span></p><p> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="recent">recent</span> <span word="Nostrum">Nostrum</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="indicates">indicates</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="thirds">thirds</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="viewed">viewed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="package">package</span> <span word="favorably">favorably</span> <span word="While">While</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="has">has</span></p><p> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="merit">merit</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vice">vice</span> <span word="presidents">presidents</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="linking">linking</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="with">with</span></p><p> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="seems">seems</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="face">face</span>. <span word="Companies">Companies</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="profitable">profitable</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ill">ill</span>-</p><p> <span word="advised">advised</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Nostrums">Nostrums</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="preceding">preceding</span> <span word="year">year</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="imply">imply</span></p><p> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Nostrum">Nostrum</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="financial">financial</span> <span word="difficulties">difficulties</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="preclude">preclude</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span></p><p> <span word="employee">employee</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Perhaps">Perhaps</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="extremely">extremely</span> <span word="large">large</span>;</p><p> <span word="whereas">whereas</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="albeit">albeit</span> <span word="lower">lower</span>, <span word="were">were</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fund">fund</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span></p>
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