GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（二十四）
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="speech">speech</span> <span word="delivered">delivered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="member">member</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="city">city</span> <span word="council">council</span>. <span word="Twenty">Twenty</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="graduated">graduated</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attend">attend</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="university">university</span>. <span word="Today">Today</span>, <span word="two">two</span> <span word="thirds">thirds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="graduate">graduate</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="Clearly">Clearly</span>, <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="effectiveness">effectiveness</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="decades">decades</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="occurred">occurred</span> <span word="despite">despite</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fact">fact</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="funding">funding</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="adjusted">adjusted</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="inflation">inflation</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="substantial">substantial</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="draws">draws</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="substantially">substantially</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="High">High</span> <span word="School">School</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Einstein">Einstein</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="remained">remained</span> <span word="relatively">relatively</span> <span word="constant">constant</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="thirds">thirds</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Einsteins">Einsteins</span> <span word="graduates">graduates</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span>, <span word="whereas">whereas</span> 20 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="suffers">suffers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="establish">establish</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="vague">vague</span> <span word="concept">concept</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="synonymous">synonymous</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="strongly">strongly</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="But">But</span>, <span word="normally">normally</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="numbers">numbers</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span>; <span word="we">we</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="prepared">prepared</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="successful">successful</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>―<span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="provided">provided</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="secondary">secondary</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="efficiency">efficiency</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="essentially">essentially</span> <span word="carry">carry</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="meaning">meaning</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="educational">educational</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>.</p>
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