GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文三二
<p> 38. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="article">article</span> <span word="argues">argues</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reverse">reverse</span> <span word="declining">declining</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="campus">campus</span></p><p> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="rentals">rentals</span>, <span word="campus">campus</span> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="officials">officials</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="available">available</span></p><p> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="units">units</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="rent">rent</span> <span word="prices">prices</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="units">units</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="line">line</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="fewer">fewer</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="units">units</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="rents">rents</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="demand">demand</span>, <span word="thereby">thereby</span></p><p> <span word="improving">improving</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rates">rates</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="resulting">resulting</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rates">rates</span></p><p> <span word="will">will</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="boost">boost</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="several">several</span></p><p> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="boosting">boosting</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="improve">improve</span></p><p> <span word="revenues">revenues</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="factors">factors</span> <span word="remaining">remaining</span> <span word="unchanged">unchanged</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="case">case</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="proposes">proposes</span> <span word="reducing">reducing</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="units">units</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="rental">rental</span> <span word="prices">prices</span>. <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span></p><p> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="revenue">revenue</span>-<span word="enhancing">enhancing</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="exceed">exceed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span>-<span word="decreasing">decreasing</span></p><p> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="price">price</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="lowering">lowering</span> <span word="rents">rents</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="by">by</span></p><p> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="demand">demand</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="decrease">decrease</span>, <span word="depending">depending</span> <span word="on">on</span></p>
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