GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文九
<p> 69. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="discontinuing">discontinuing</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span></p><p> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="concentrating">concentrating</span> <span word="advertising">advertising</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="requires">requires</span></p><p> <span word="replacement">replacement</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span></p><p> <span word="reports">reports</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filters">filters</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>, <span word="have">have</span> <span word="dropped">dropped</span></p><p> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="began">began</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="six">six</span></p><p> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="ago">ago</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="departments">departments</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="specious">specious</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="important">important</span></p><p> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="assumes">assumes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="discontinues">discontinues</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="new">new</span></p><p> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>, <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="resume">resume</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filter">filter</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="may">may</span></p><p> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="correct">correct</span>. <span word="Customers">Customers</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="prefer">prefer</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="requires">requires</span></p><p> <span word="replacement">replacement</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="often">often</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span>, <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="buying">buying</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companys">companys</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="filters">filters</span> <span word="again">again</span>,</p><p> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="customers">customers</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="competitor">competitor</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="product">product</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="event">event</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="profits">profits</span>.</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="marketing">marketing</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="recognize">recognize</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="strategies">strategies</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="profits">profits</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="discontinuing">discontinuing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="filter">filter</span> <span word="would">would</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="lowering">lowering</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="model">model</span>, <span word="raising">raising</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="price">price</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="deluxe">deluxe</span> <span word="model">model</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="both">both</span>,</p>
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