GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文六
<p> 64. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Director">Director</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Human">Human</span> <span word="Resources">Resources</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="Company">Company</span> <span word="X">X</span></p><p> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="satisfactorily">satisfactorily</span> <span word="addressed">addressed</span>.</p><p> <span word="Two">Two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employees">employees</span></p><p> <span word="showed">showed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="employee">employee</span>-</p><p> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="instituted">instituted</span> <span word="regular">regular</span></p><p> <span word="voluntary">voluntary</span> <span word="sessions">sessions</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="designed">designed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="directors">directors</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="validity">validity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="doubtful">doubtful</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="about">about</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="surveyed">surveyed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="respondents">respondents</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="impossible">impossible</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="assess">assess</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="validity">validity</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="results">results</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="if">if</span> 200 <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="surveyed">surveyed</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="only">only</span></p><p> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="responded">responded</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="employees">employees</span> <span word="ranked">ranked</span> <span word="employee">employee</span>-</p><p> <span word="management">management</span> <span word="communication">communication</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="pressing">pressing</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="highly">highly</span> <span word="suspect">suspect</span>.</p><p> <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="offers">offers</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="interpretations">interpretations</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="this">this</span>,</p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>.</p><p> <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="survey">survey</span> <span word="accurately">accurately</span> <span word="ranks">ranks</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="issues">issues</span> <span word="according">according</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="level">level</span></p>
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