GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（二十一）
<p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="Natural">Natural</span> <span word="Spring">Spring</span> <span word="Water">Water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="preferable">preferable</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="drinking">drinking</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="water">water</span>. <span word="Three">Three</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>: <span word="SNSW">SNSW</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="health">health</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bacteria">bacteria</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span>―<span word="the">the</span> <span word="town">town</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bottled">bottled</span>―<span word="are">are</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="average">average</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="relies">relies</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="variety">variety</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="dubious">dubious</span> <span word="assumptions">assumptions</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="underlying">underlying</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="contain">contain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="question">question</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="completely">completely</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bacteria">bacteria</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="supported">supported</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="tap">tap</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="contain">contain</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="minerals">minerals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="bacteria">bacteria</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="authors">authors</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="substantially">substantially</span> <span word="undermined">undermined</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="drink">drink</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="SNSW">SNSW</span>. <span word="Lacking">Lacking</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="Saluda">Saluda</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bottled">bottled</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="merely">merely</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="SNSW">SNSW</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="bottled">bottled</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="dispute">dispute</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="possibility">possibility</span>.</p><p> <span word="Finally">Finally</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="assumed">assumed</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="average">average</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="drink">drink</span> <span word="SNSW">SNSW</span>. <span word="Again">Again</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span>. <span word="Perhaps">Perhaps</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="hospitalized">hospitalized</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="younger">younger</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="average">average</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="vegetarians">vegetarians</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span> <span word="daily">daily</span>. <span word="That">That</span> <span word="is">is</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="cited">cited</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="disparity">disparity</span>.</p>
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