GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文六七
<p> 67. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span> <span word="claims">claims</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="greatly">greatly</span> <span word="influence">influence</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="interests">interests</span>,</p><p> <span word="recreational">recreational</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="appearance">appearance</span>. <span word="While">While</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="determined">determined</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="to">to</span></p><p> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="generally">generally</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="observation">observation</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="occupation">occupation</span></p><p> <span word="influences">influences</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="depends">depends</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="work">work</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="central">central</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="self">self</span>.</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="consider">consider</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="friends">friends</span> <span word="Steve">Steve</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="William">William</span>. <span word="Steve">Steve</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span></p><p> <span word="gardener">gardener</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="creates">creates</span> <span word="oil">oil</span> <span word="paintings">paintings</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="poignancy">poignancy</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="leisure">leisure</span></p><p> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="spent">spent</span> <span word="alternately">alternately</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sea">sea</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wilderness">wilderness</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="dark">dark</span> <span word="cafes">cafes</span>. <span word="William">William</span> <span word="paints">paints</span></p><p> <span word="houses">houses</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="living">living</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="collects">collects</span> <span word="fine">fine</span> <span word="art">art</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="edition">edition</span>, <span word="as">as</span></p><p> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> <span word="voraciously">voraciously</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="history">history</span>. <span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="appearance">appearance</span> <span word="speak">speak</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="Steve">Steve</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="William">William</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="living">living</span>, <span word="because">because</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="men">men</span></p><p> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="subsidizing">subsidizing</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="manifest">manifest</span></p><p> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="selves">selves</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="chosen">chosen</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="spill">spill</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="into">into</span></p><p> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="lives">lives</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nature">nature</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="permits">permits</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="maintain">maintain</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="distinctive">distinctive</span></p>
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