GMAT考试写作指导：Argument范文十一
<p> 71. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="editorial">editorial</span> <span word="concludes">concludes</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="guidelines">guidelines</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="pilots">pilots</span> <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="maintaining">maintaining</span> <span word="equipment">equipment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="medical">medical</span>-<span word="helicopter">helicopter</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="ineffective">ineffective</span>, <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span></p><p> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="stringent">stringent</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="airline">airline</span> <span word="industries">industries</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="this">this</span></p><p> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="showing">showing</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="medical">medical</span>-<span word="helicopter">helicopter</span></p><p> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="helicopters">helicopters</span> <span word="or">or</span></p><p> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="airliners">airliners</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="critical">critical</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="rests">rests</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="unstated">unstated</span> <span word="assumption">assumption</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="involving">involving</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="helicopters">helicopters</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="inadequate">inadequate</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="or">or</span></p><p> <span word="equipment">equipment</span> <span word="maintenance">maintenance</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="acknowledge">acknowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="rule">rule</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="other">other</span></p><p> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="fact">fact</span>, <span word="common">common</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="tells">tells</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="medical">medical</span>-<span word="helicopter">helicopter</span></p><p> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exigent">exigent</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="dangerous">dangerous</span> <span word="flying">flying</span></p><p> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="landing">landing</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="typify">typify</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="emergencies">emergencies</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="helicopters">helicopters</span> <span word="are">are</span></p><p> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="gain">gain</span> <span word="access">access</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="victims">victims</span>.</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="second">second</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="related">related</span>, <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="unfairly">unfairly</span> <span word="compares">compares</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accident">accident</span></p><p> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="helicopters">helicopters</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="accident">accident</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="non">non</span>-<span word="emergency">emergency</span> <span word="aircraft">aircraft</span>. <span word="Medical">Medical</span></p>
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