GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（四）
<p> 4. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="presented">presented</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="directors">directors</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="manufactures">manufactures</span> <span word="parts">parts</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="heavy">heavy</span> <span word="machinery">machinery</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="falling">falling</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="experiencing">experiencing</span> <span word="coincide">coincide</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="delays">delays</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span>. <span word="These">These</span> <span word="delays">delays</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="are">are</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="metals">metals</span>. <span word="Consider">Consider</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="handles">handles</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="raw">raw</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="excellent">excellent</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="psychology">psychology</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sociology">sociology</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="knows">knows</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="properties">properties</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="metals">metals</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="company">company</span> <span word="should">should</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="move">move</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="department">department</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scientist">scientist</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="division">division</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="department">department</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="coincidence">coincidence</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="falling">falling</span> <span word="revenues">revenues</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="delays">delays</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="recommends">recommends</span> <span word="replacing">replacing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="department">department</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="action">action</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="twofold">twofold</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="delays">delays</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="traced">traced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="planning">planning</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="metals">metals</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="properties">properties</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="metals">metals</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="thought">thought</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poor">poor</span> <span word="planning">planning</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="further">further</span> <span word="recommended">recommended</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="filled">filled</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scientist">scientist</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="division">division</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="manager">manager</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reassigned">reassigned</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sales">sales</span> <span word="department">department</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="latter">latter</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="states">states</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="purchasing">purchasing</span> <span word="managers">managers</span> <span word="background">background</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="business">business</span>, <span word="psychology">psychology</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sociology">sociology</span> <span word="equip">equip</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="assignment">assignment</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="recommendations">recommendations</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="report">report</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="questionable">questionable</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span>.</p>
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