GMAT写作辅导：109题Argument范文（三十一）
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="appeared">appeared</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="newspaper">newspaper</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="giving">giving</span> <span word="advice">advice</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="investments">investments</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="expectancy">expectancy</span> <span word="continues">continues</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="rise">rise</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="growing">growing</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="older">older</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="over">over</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span> <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="residents">residents</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="populated">populated</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="least">least</span> 65 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="resort">resort</span> <span word="hotels">hotels</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="months">months</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="prudent">prudent</span> <span word="investor">investor</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="advised">advised</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="sell">sell</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hotels">hotels</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="invest">invest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nursing">nursing</span> <span word="homes">homes</span> <span word="instead">instead</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span>... <span word="etc">etc</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="prudent">prudent</span> <span word="investors">investors</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="advised">advised</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="stop">stop</span> <span word="investing">investing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hotels">hotels</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="invest">invest</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hospitals">hospitals</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="nursing">nursing</span> <span word="homes">homes</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="cites">cites</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>―<span word="an">an</span> <span word="aging">aging</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hotel">hotel</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span>―<span word="as">as</span> <span word="grounds">grounds</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="advice">advice</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="illustrate">illustrate</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="refers">refers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span>, <span word="where">where</span> 20 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="over">over</span> 65 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rates">rates</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="resort">resort</span> <span word="hotels">hotels</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="six">six</span> <span word="months">months</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unconvincing">unconvincing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="couple">couple</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="respects">respects</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="aging">aging</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="hotel">hotel</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="rate">rate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="declining">declining</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="cited">cited</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="suggestive">suggestive</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="trends">trends</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="insufficient">insufficient</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="warrant">warrant</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="drawn">drawn</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="unnamed">unnamed</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="representative">representative</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="entire">entire</span> <span word="country">country</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="data">data</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="gathered">gathered</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="Florida">Florida</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="unrepresentative">unrepresentative</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="obvious">obvious</span>. <span word="Florida">Florida</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="populated">populated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="disproportionate">disproportionate</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="retired">retired</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="over">over</span> 65 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="vacation">vacation</span> <span word="destination">destination</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="winter">winter</span> <span word="months">months</span>. <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="resort">resort</span> <span word="hotel">hotel</span> <span word="occupancy">occupancy</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Florida">Florida</span> <span word="typically">typically</span> <span word="declines">declines</span> <span word="significantly">significantly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="summer">summer</span> <span word="months">months</span>.</p>
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