GMAT考试写作指导：Issue写作范文七一
<p> 71. <span word="Has">Has</span> <span word="commercialism">commercialism</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="widespread">widespread</span>, <span word="particularly">particularly</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>, <span word="churches">churches</span>, <span word="and">and</span></p><p> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="places">places</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="traditionally">traditionally</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="safe">safe</span> <span word="havens">havens</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="commercialism">commercialism</span>? <span word="If">If</span> <span word="so">so</span>, <span word="does">does</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="curb">curb</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>? <span word="The">The</span> <span word="answer">answer</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="questions">questions</span>,</p><p> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span>.</p><p> <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="evidence">evidence</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="commercialism">commercialism</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="creeping">creeping</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="churches">churches</span>.</p><p> <span word="Admittedly">Admittedly</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="activity">activity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="schools">schools</span>. <span word="Food">Food</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="is">is</span></p><p> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="outsourced">outsourced</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="fast">fast</span>-<span word="food">food</span> <span word="chains">chains</span>; <span word="a">a</span> <span word="plethora">plethora</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="goods">goods</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="services">services</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sold">sold</span> <span word="in">in</span></p><p> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="bookstores">bookstores</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="advertised">advertised</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="newspapers">newspapers</span>; <span word="and">and</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="as">as</span></p><p> <span word="walking">walking</span> <span word="billboards">billboards</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="logos">logos</span> <span word="appear">appear</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="clothing">clothing</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span></p><p> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="commercialism">commercialism</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="interfere">interfere</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>; <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="contrary">contrary</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span></p><p> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="cases">cases</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="efficient">efficient</span> <span word="functioning">functioning</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="organization">organization</span>.</p><p> <span word="Outsourcing">Outsourcing</span> <span word="food">food</span> <span word="service">service</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cost">cost</span>-<span word="cutting">cutting</span> <span word="measure">measure</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="provides">provides</span></p><p> <span word="additional">additional</span> <span word="funding">funding</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="materials">materials</span>, <span word="facilities">facilities</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="salaries">salaries</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="general">general</span>, <span word="commercialism">commercialism</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="widespread">widespread</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span></p><p> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="byproducts">byproducts</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decline">decline</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>. <span word="Electronic">Electronic</span></p><p> <span word="billboards">billboards</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="backdrops">backdrops</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="televised">televised</span> <span word="sporting">sporting</span> <span word="events">events</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Web">Web</span> <span word="sites">sites</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="sell">sell</span></p>
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