GMAT写作范文：新与旧
<p> <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="represent">represent</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="valuable">valuable</span> <span word="record">record</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="societys">societys</span> <span word="past">past</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="controversy">controversy</span> <span word="arises">arises</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="ground">ground</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="planners">planners</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="purposes">purposes</span>.</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span>-<span word="preserving">preserving</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="encouraging">encouraging</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="development">development</span>? <span word="Explain">Explain</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="position">position</span>, <span word="using">using</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experiences">experiences</span>, <span word="observations">observations</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="reading">reading</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raze">raze</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="old">old</span>, <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="complex">complex</span> <span word="one">one</span>, <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="involves">involves</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="conflict">conflict</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="preserving">preserving</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="culture">culture</span>, <span word="tradition">tradition</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="legitimate">legitimate</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="create">create</span> <span word="practical">practical</span> <span word="facilities">facilities</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="utilitarian">utilitarian</span> <span word="purposes">purposes</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="view">view</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="final">final</span> <span word="judgment">judgment</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="depend">depend</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="case">case</span>-<span word="by">by</span>-<span word="case">case</span> <span word="analysis">analysis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="factors">factors</span>.</p><p> <span word="One">One</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span>. <span word="An">An</span> <span word="older">older</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="worth">worth</span> <span word="saving">saving</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="uniquely">uniquely</span> <span word="represents">represents</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="bygone">bygone</span> <span word="era">era</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="older">older</span> <span word="buildings">buildings</span> <span word="represent">represent</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="era">era</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="effectively">effectively</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="negligible">negligible</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="figured">figured</span> <span word="centrally">centrally</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citys">citys</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="municipal">municipal</span> <span word="structure">structure</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="founding">founding</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="historical">historical</span> <span word="figure">figure</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="location">location</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="events">events</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unremarkable">unremarkable</span> <span word="one">one</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="key">key</span> <span word="factor">factor</span> <span word="involves">involves</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="specific">specific</span> <span word="utilitarian">utilitarian</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="community">community</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relative">relative</span> <span word="costs">costs</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="alternative">alternative</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="mainly">mainly</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="office">office</span> <span word="space">space</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="architecturally">architecturally</span> <span word="appropriate">appropriate</span> <span word="add">add</span>-<span word="on">on</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="annex">annex</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="building">building</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="an">an</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="retrofit">retrofit</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="worthwhile">worthwhile</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="retrofitting">retrofitting</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="permit">permit</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="desired">desired</span> <span word="function">function</span>- <span word="Moreover">Moreover</span>, <span word="retrofitting">retrofitting</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="undermine">undermine</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="historic">historic</span> <span word="value">value</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="altering">altering</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="aesthetic">aesthetic</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="architectural">architectural</span> <span word="integrity">integrity</span>.</p>
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